Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Chapter 14

Chapter 14

One dull rainy day at the beginning of November Eshan called Iqbal and me into his office. He taught them about the untied states. he taught that in Bosten  every year they had this contest about who helped the world they gave the award to Iqbal  also in Sweden they want Iqbal to speak there. then eshan said that he would be working with them. Iqbal would be helping them hes important to them. then they talk to Fatima saying that they have found her village. her heart jumped she was finally going home. then one day  she stumbled Capone Iqbal try to read his speech. Iqbal wanted to take her and her little brother but she didn't want to go. when they gave him his prize and some ladies cried.

15 comments:

  1. where is your grammar knowledge and what do you mean by when they gave him his prize and some ladies cried? Learn grammar kid

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    1. Please use a capital letter at the start of a sentence. Put a question mark after a question. Please use quotation marks when referring to text from someone else. Finally, use commas and periods for crying out loud.

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    2. I agree use proper punctuation

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  2. and u forget a period at the end of ur sentance.........

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  3. 0 grammar. How did you even get on this page. You need grammar!

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  4. you all are just hatting on sume randome kid

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  5. pls what type of English is this

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  6. is this even english? this is sh!t

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