Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Chapter 15

Chapter 15

 
Its was a letter from maria. it said that  she wish that Fatima was near her these days. She said that she missed her . then she gave said new . she said that one day this car was passing and saw Iqbal  then after that rolled down the window and shot 5 shots and one of them hit Iqbal and killed him. tell everyone what happen love maria.

Chapter 14

Chapter 14

One dull rainy day at the beginning of November Eshan called Iqbal and me into his office. He taught them about the untied states. he taught that in Bosten  every year they had this contest about who helped the world they gave the award to Iqbal  also in Sweden they want Iqbal to speak there. then eshan said that he would be working with them. Iqbal would be helping them hes important to them. then they talk to Fatima saying that they have found her village. her heart jumped she was finally going home. then one day  she stumbled Capone Iqbal try to read his speech. Iqbal wanted to take her and her little brother but she didn't want to go. when they gave him his prize and some ladies cried.

Chapter 13

Chapter 13

  One day in the fall the liberation front heard about a illegal brick factory and went to investigate. Iqbal went with them. They traveled for more than an hour in the dark. The night was cold so we took cover under the tarp in the back of the pickup truck. We must have looked like little mushi One day in the fall the liberation front heard about a illegal brick factory and went to investigate. Iqbal went with them. They traveled for more than an hour in the dark. The night was cold so we took cover under the tarp in the back of the pickup truck. We must have looked like l babies under a blanket. Then Iqbal found the kids and were talking to them. The  arrived in a big car. When he saw us talking to the workers he got very angry. He yelled at us to go away. Eshan explained who we are. Than mushi ran in to his green iron hut. Then later they were waiting for dinner. The usual sounds of the street were heard. Then Iqbal said that he was afraid but not to tell anyone. Then I said don't worry I wont tell anyone.

Chapter 12

Chapter 12

After dinner Iqbal made a solemn deceleration to the man and woman. He said that he wanted to stay and help free all the children who are slaves in Pakistan. Eshan said that wasn't possible to do that. Then Iqbal went to visit his family ten day later Eshan brought him back. Twig and little Ali and the others left. Iqbal had the crazy idea of to hit the moneylenders because there the blame for everything. Iqbal was full of plans for the future.

Chapter 11

Chapter 11

Iqbal came back the next day but he wasn't alone. They recognized the man he was Eshan Khan from the bonded labor liberation front. There were police men with them. They started to say he did it this time he did it. Hussain threatened argued and begged but Iqbal still took them into the work shop. Then they go with the police men to the headquarters and the volunteers started to clap when they got there. They were afraid but Eshan Khan came to them and said you would be able to see your parents again

Chapter 10

Chapter 10

A new spring arrived. The wind began to blow down from the mountains. At first it was cold but then became warmer. The spring breeze made them smile. One spring day the big news was that Iqbal ran away once again. After a year that Iqbal arrived a bunch of things changed. Then they asked Maria to read something Iqbal gave them. It was about to stop exploitation of child labor. They went to work then Karim checked for all the workers. Then went to tell Hussain that one of the workers was missing.

Monday, January 21, 2013

Chapter 9

Chapter 9


That evening Fatima and the rest of the people was around Iqbal's pallet. Then Iqbal starts to explain his story. He reached the city at dawn. The sky was gray and it was raining. There were tall house so tall you couldn’t see the tops. Then after a while Iqbal became tried from talking because he was weak. Then they said if they cant trust the police then whom can they trust. Then Iqbal had a paper around then one of the oldest said you forgot all of us don’t know how to read. But suddenly Maria said I know how to read.

Chapter 8

Chapter 8


Then Fatima said as soon that Iqbal escaped hussian got all his friends and climbed into Toyota’s vans and went to search for him. And for now they only had to work only one hour. Then after that one-day the master and his wife came and said quickly quickly for them to go into the tomb. When they went into the tomb a kid cloud see what was happening. So what was happening was that there were policeman at the gate to search the house and Iqbal was with them. Then suddenly they hear Iqbal say no she saw that the police was giving Iqbal back. They took him in the house. They heard Iqbal keep on yelling but it didn’t do anything. Then he put Iqbal in the tomb. Then one-day hussian came to the workshop and saw Maria. He asked what she was doing and saw it was a kite. Then said for her to go into the tomb. Then they said for him to send all of them in to the tomb.

Chapter 7

Chapter 7


Then Fatima said that Iqbal was released from the tomb after 3 days. For the next month ting went usual. Sometimes they could see heat lightning in the sky reminding them that rain was on their way. Then hussian sold one of the older boys and came with a new one. The new boy was tall thin. You could count his ribs. They immediately named him twig. Twig was sent to sweep the workshop the courtyard and sometimes the house. After they ate lunch they went slowly back to work. During the afternoon hours there attention was easily distracted. They started to talk and sometimes they even laughed. Hussian made Iqbal make the same rug once again. Hussian kept a constant eye on Iqbal. But didn't say a word. After Hussian left they would get into a circle. Then twig says that they should all run way.       

Chapter 6

Chapter 6


Then fatima starts to explain the tomb. you cant breath there said Salman who was there a few months ago.you feel your self suffocating and you think your going mad. if feels like some one is grabbing your throat and squeezing. then you begin to see strange shapes and colors. but they don't help you they only scare you. and that there's spiders and scorpions. there's usually music at night but after the foreigners visit the house there was no music tonight. then Karim said that when he was a little kid that hussian put a kid in the tomb for 5 days. he came out almost dead with all his skin coming off after he got well he would work. then fatima try to give food to Iqbal. they went in and meet Iqbal there and said to him that they will go there every night.              



Chapter 5


Chapter 5

      Fatima said that when the foreign costumers arrived was a special morning. Hussain couldn't bully to badly in front of their presence. That morning they had a bigger breakfast than usual which put them in a good move. They were allowed to laugh and chat while we waited to pass the filthy curtain outside the bath room. Karim was terrified by the idea that something could happen and the master would blame him. Most of the kids avoided Iqbal because they were envious. There master was passing around and suddenly turned white. He turned around to look at Iqbal's loom the carpet he made was perfect Iqbal worked better and faster then anyone else. Iqbal then cut the perfect rug in have with a knife. The master screamed like a pig. Before the master could get there Iqbal cut the rug in 2 more pieces. The mistress cried and picked up the pieces. Hussian said that Iqbal's previous master said that Iqbal was a traitor and a rebel then that he was a viper and to not to trust him but he was blind and stupid and that Iqbal was going to pay. Iqbal was sent to the tomb. Then they heard a loud bang and Hussian came up and told them to back to work.

Chapter 4


Chapter 4

      Fatima said that more than month passed and nothing happened. the heat got wore and worse and they worked harder and harder. their keeper kept walking around the workshop nervously.the old timers knew that he was excepting a visit from clients when they stopped working there fingers all bled from the cuts the threads made.the rest of the kids there said that Iqbal wanted to become knew that wasn't true. then Iqbal said Hussein wont cancel the debut. he learned from his experience from his other masters.then Iqbal said to Fatima that one day he will get away from there.

Thursday, January 10, 2013

chapter 3

chapter 3

     That same night as soon the master turn off the lights they all crawled slowly to Iqbal's bed to talk to him. they asked him about his life and he said his story. his farther used to go out early in the boring when the first rays of sun came out to plow the ground. he would go with him carrying the bottle of waters and veggies his mother made them take. in the beginning his father would feel anything but in the afternoon his face would be red and sweat from doing the work. he said to his land that if you throw a seed and by the grace of god a family could live in abundance of the seed and told him to rem beer that.

chapter 2

chapter 2

     Iqbal appeared one morning during the summer.the she starts to talk about that the master has a TV. suddenly she noticed she had to go back to work because Hussein didn't let their minds wander. then she say the lights go down in the room and looked at the door. when she turned her head she saw her master holding Iqbal by his hand. the boy was thin and dark and not very tall. her first impression was that he was handsome then she shot the idea out her head. then she said the new boy was different. then she say him make the carpet he was so much faster and and skillful then the others .

chapter 1


1/10/13
chapter one


 
    in the first chapter Fatima is explaining about where they live. the house of there master was half stone half sheet iron.  across the courtyard from the house was a long building the carpet factory fourteen of us worked. we were all bonded to Hussain khan to pay off our family debuts. then she starts to explain about the different type of workers there was her type and the numskulls. then goes back to explain that every moring they would talk about there dreams. and that they only had to go to the bath room for certain amount of time. she would try to look out the window to see the world. she has been doing this for 3 years and that she didn't work any of her debut off until Iqbal came.