Thursday, January 10, 2013

chapter 1


1/10/13
chapter one


 
    in the first chapter Fatima is explaining about where they live. the house of there master was half stone half sheet iron.  across the courtyard from the house was a long building the carpet factory fourteen of us worked. we were all bonded to Hussain khan to pay off our family debuts. then she starts to explain about the different type of workers there was her type and the numskulls. then goes back to explain that every moring they would talk about there dreams. and that they only had to go to the bath room for certain amount of time. she would try to look out the window to see the world. she has been doing this for 3 years and that she didn't work any of her debut off until Iqbal came.

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    1. Actually no offense the grammar is not on point. There is no capitalization and the person doesn't even know how to spell (no offense) just telling the truth no hate. By the way, people learn from their mistakes so it's okay to not have a little bit of grammar, even I didn't have grammar before but I learned so keep trying. But I like the summary it was helpful! :)

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    2. period please say it again

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    3. shut the hell up i bet you cant even write better

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  2. You need capitals at the beginning of each sentence. This really helpful though! =)

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  4. bro!.............r u rly Ben Miles?

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  5. my class just started to read this book and this helped a lot. thank you

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  6. you thought i was telling the truth

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  7. this fucking suck my balls real hard

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